Borderless Journal Entry posted by badger11 in Publication April 14, 2023 280 views Share More sharing options... Followers 0 I have a walking poem here https://borderlessjournal.com/2023/04/14/unbinding-by-phil-wood/ Bw Phil 1
David W. Parsley Posted April 16, 2023 Nice piece, Phil, well suited to the periodical. I like the opportunistic nature of the rhymes, not forcing form, and definitely resisting tugs from the Great Sonnet Tidal Pool to just let the poem express itself and be done. Frankly, an artificially imposed volta or capstoning rhyming couplet would probably disturb this open-aired piece. I could learn from your example here. Well Done, - David 1 Quote Link to comment
badger11 Posted April 17, 2023 'an open air piece' lovely, thoughtful, understanding David. Bw Phil Quote Link to comment
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